The prop works.
The walk seems rushed- let us be in the moment. Where are you walking and why would you blow out the candle before talking to your uncle? Unclear how your actions reflect the environment, work on consistency
Some of the ends of your sentences are lost due to the volume
We’ll rejoice and remember the sufferings- what are you trying to get? Do you want to enstill hope? How does this line then sound different? Hope should sound different than discussing the struggle and pain.
Caress pronunciation – see me about this
I believe that Uncle- do you really believe that? How does the tonality of your voice show this?
We’ll rest- repetition provides opportunities
(First realism monologue performance feedback)